Fire Cove~ Part 1
My name is Victoria Farnsworth. About a year ago I was a normal girl living in a mansion with my mother and father in the town of Aztec. All that changed when a pirate captain came to our door looking for a key to unlock a chest. I had found the key just the day before and before I knew it, I had volunteered to go on some crazy treasure hunt with the captain. I never imagined this would happen, but now I am a pirate, sailing the seas with my captain, Elinor McGovern and her crew mates Celeste and Juliet. I really couldn’t be happier! But then, someone showed up and I soon discovered that, yes, I could be so much happier…
“Captain, I see a ship headin’ our way!” Juliet called from the crow’s nest.
Captain Elinor turned her gaze toward the ship and said, “Aye, I can see it. If it seems to be goin’ right past us, just ignore it.”
“But, if it seems to be followin’ us we’ll have to make contact.” Captain Elinor ordered.
As the ship drew nearer we could tell that whoever was on that ship wanted to talk. Pretty soon we were right next to each other and someone from the other ship called, “Ahoy, thar! I wish to speak to the captain of yer ship!” It was a man’s voice and something about it sounded familiar. Like a voice I had heard a long time ago.
Elinor replied, “I’m the captain of this ship! What do ye want?”
“May I come aboard? Indeed I mean you no harm, only to talk.” The man said. Elinor thought for a moment then she said, “Aye, you may. But ye must come weaponless!”
“So be it.” The man replied and swung over on a rope.
“Are you Captain Elinor McGovern?” He asked with a look of worry.
As soon as I saw his face I knew I had seen him before. “Who is this man? Surely I do not know him as a pirate. I’m sure I’ve seen his face before when I was younger!” I said to myself.
“Aye, I am. And who might you be?” Elinor asked.
“I am Captain Ja-” He paused as he noticed me. “Victoria? Is that you?” He asked.
“That depends on who is asking.” I replied. Since he obviously knew who I was, I knew I must know him as well. But still, I never gave out my name to anybody until I knew who they were.
“It’s me, Jake.” He said.
“Jake Turner? It can’t be you! You can’t be the same Jake who went off to medical school. That was six years ago!” I said.
“I didn’t go to medical school. I left so I could be who I am now, a pirate captain. It’s all I’ve ever wanted. I know I shouldn’t have lied to everyone, but the past is in the past. And I have to say, it is certainly good to see a familiar face.” He said. I was in such a state of shock that all I could do was smile.
“Well, Captain Turner, what is it ye need?” Jake almost forgot what he was doing here.
“Ah, yes. I-I bring bad tidings.” He stammered. It seemed hard for him to get out the words. “Your sister, Elena, is being held captive by the evil Blackheart Jones. She tracked me down and sent me to find you and tell you.” He said. Captain Elinor looked down at her feet. For years Elinor hadn’t gotten along with her sister. It wasn’t until last year that they finally made amends. I thought that it must’ve been hard for Elinor to hear that Elena was a captive. “What must I do?” Elinor asked.
“Blackheart says yer to bring her the Cube of Light which you stole. Only then will she let your sister go free.” Jake explained.
“The Cube of Light? What makes her think I stole it? I’ve never had it in my hands before!” Elinor said. Jake thought for a moment before replying. “I don’t know what her plans are, but if you don’t return it to her within a fortnight, there will be major consequences.” He said quickly. “I will take my leave now.”
He was just about to reach for a rope to swing back to his ship on when Elinor said, “Stop! You delivered this message. You know what I need to do! You will help me find the Cube of Light and free my sister, or else.”
Jake sighed, “Very well. We set our course for Fire Cove.”
That’s the end of Part 1! Look for Part 2 coming soon! 😀
“The past is in the past!” XD from frozen!
I LOVE IT!
LOL! Yeah, it was a perfect spot for it! 😀
Thank you so much!! 😀
Lol!! I loved that, too!!
Hmm… interesting. Can’t wait for the next part 😀
When I first saw Cube of Light, I thought it said Cube of Ice 😛
Oh my gosh! I can’t wait for the next part!!! YAY!
Are you writing this down for published stories???
Well, I actually typed up this whole story a month or two ago, but it came out too short for it to be a book. I have thought a lot about turning my photostories into books to be published, though 🙂
Tell me if you do!
You could make a collection of short stories!
How long was it when you typed it out?
Okay, I will! 😀
Well, when I printed it out it was a few pages long 😉
Can’t wait for more!!
Omg! You are so talented at everything! Loved the frozen line too! Elijah is just so so so cute!!!!!!
Thank you so much! 😀
Very interesting. 🙂 I love series’, but in another way they drive me crazy because I want the next part!!! 😀 LOL
LOL! I know exactly how you feel! 😀
THE RETURN OF VICTORIA!! BEST DAY EVER!! YES YES YES!!! 😛
Can’t wait to see the next part. :-O
LOL! Thank you! Getting ready to post the next part now! 🙂
Cool story! how many parts will it have? and- isnt cap elinor kirsten?! you hardly use her shes so cute.
Thank you! I’m planning for about 6 or 7 parts and then there will be another sequel 😉
Yes, that’s Kirsten! I know, she is really cute! I don’t know why I don’t use her so much. She has been in all of my photostory series, though! Well, except for An Unexpected Injury 😛
oh yeah- youre right about you using kirsten in photo storys. by the way any tips on frizzy doll hair at the ends of the hair? my siage is needing help! :/
Oh, no! Do you squirt your doll’s hair when you brush it? If you are, it doesn’t seem like that should be happening… 🙁
I read somewhere that spraying AG doll hair with water dries it out, Jaclynn..
No, AG specialists always say to mist your doll’s hair when you brush it. It helps it stay nicer 😉
I do it on my dolls all the time and the ends haven’t dried out 🙂
no i dont.maybe thats the trouble ill do that.
This is great. I love it. I could not wait for this story to come out and now it is finally here! Thanks Jaclynn.
Thank you so much! I’m glad you are enjoying it 🙂
Great story! I’m looking forward to the next installment.
Thank you! 🙂
What photostory is this a sequel to? I know Captain Elena was in the princess photostory, (I forget what it was called.) but someone else said “the return of Victoria,” so I was wondering.
This is a sequel to “A Pirate Adventure”. You can search for the title in my “search” bar and all 9 parts will come up 🙂
For now, here’s a link to Part 1: