Fire Cove~ Part 2
As I lay asleep that night I felt something poking my shoulder. “Hm, what’s wrong?” I asked. It was Elinor trying to wake me up.
“Captain Turner is up to something. I have a feelin’ that he’s working with Blackheart.” I looked at Elinor with surprise. “Elinor, Jake wouldn’t do anything like that. I’ve known him for a long time and he has always been a man of good form. Anyways, why would he want your sister?” I asked.
“That I haven’t figured out yet. All I know is that he’s up to no good. He can’t be trusted.” Elinor said. I sighed, “Well you can be cautious of him if you want, but I happen to know that he can be trusted. He was fine man back in Aztec.”
Elinor studied me for a moment. “You don’t love him do you?” Elinor asked with concern.
“Of course not! I could never love Jake, I only consider him a friend and that is all. Anyways, you know that pirates can’t be married. It’s part of the Code and it’s something we all agree to when we become pirates. I am very shocked you even said such a thing.” I replied.
I said goodnight and went back to bed. I wanted to try getting a little sleep before the break of dawn.
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Our day started out pretty good. Jake and Elinor talked over what needed to be done and Celeste, Juliet, and I talked with each other. “What do ye think of Captain Turner?” Juliet asked.
“I think he’s suspicious. He pauses too much when you ask him a question.” Celeste replied.
“I think he’s just shy. He probably doesn’t talk to a lot of people now.” I said. I guess I was trying to defend him. He was my friend, after all.
“V-v-victoria..” Juliet stammered.
“Juliet, what’s wron-?” I was cut off when Jake yelled,
“Victoria, watch out!”
I spun around and could not believe my eyes!
There right in front of me was the vicious Leviathan! I had heard so many tales and songs about it that seeing it was almost amazing! But still, I was absolutely frozen in fear!
I could not move. I could hardly hear Juliet and Celeste who were trying to tell me what to do and to get away slowly.
The Leviathan had it’s mouth wide open and was Β just about to get me when, “Victoria!!”
Jake came running towards me with his sword. As he pushed me to the ground with his left hand he killed the Leviathan with his right.
Within a second after Jake killed it, he was helping me up.
“Are you alright?” Jake asked with concern. “Y-yes, I’m fine.” I said, although I was a bit shaken.
“Good. I’m gonna clean my sword now.” He said.
“Jake, wait! Why did you do that? You could’ve been seriously injured- or worse!” I said.
Jake looked at me with a grin. “I know, but I couldn’t let anything happen to you.”
That’s the end of Part 2! Look for Part 3 hopefully coming tomorrow! π
~Jaclynn~
This is getting pretty exciting! π The vicious leviathan looked kind of cute. LOL! I suppose it is more vicious to dolls than people. π
Thank you! LOL! I know, but she was all I had to use! π π
~Jaclynn~
Yeah, I totally understand. You use what you have. π
~Christian Homeschooler
P.S. I recently posted a review of Doll Play on my blog. Thought you’d be interested. π
Oh, cool! I’ll check it out! π
~Jaclynn~
Yay! I looooove this series, post soon! (And by soon I mean- NOW!;))
-Emma-
Yay! Thank you! LOL! Believe me, I wish I could post ALL of the parts today, but I just can’t. π π
~Jaclynn~
Oh, and ps- I think “Jake” looks adorable in his pirate costume!
-Emma-
Haha! Thank you! I think he does, too! π
~Jaclynn~
Ooooh! Suspense! By the way, how old is Victoria supposed to be? Or does she not have a specific age?
~Carli
Hehe! She is around 19-20 years old π
~Jaclynn~
Oooh! Okay, I was thinking younger, that makes more sense when they were talking about marriage and stuff like that. It would have been a little awkward if she was 14 π
~Carli
I feel a love story coming ooooon!!
You write like me!! That’s awesome!
If you’d like to email me (like email buddies!) I’d love it!
We seem a lot alike π
I love the story!!
I’ll be checking this page about five(billion) times a day to see more!
LOL! Yeeeeahh, but it’s not all about love, but it is a big part in it π
Sounds fun! Only I don’t check my email that often π I’ll ask my mom about it, though! π
Thank you!! LOL! π
~Jaclynn~
That’s so cute!!!
Lol,okay!!!
Hope you have a great day!
And no problem!
Yay! I love this series so far! I think Jake might have a crush on a special someone…….
LOL Viscous Leviathan (obviously I can’t spell vicious)!
Akakakakakakakakakakak!!!! Wow! Can’t wait for the next part…you must post it right now OR ELSE! π
~Lydia~ <3
WOW!!!!
That’s all I have to say, WOW! AMAZING! AND…MORE! π
LOL! Thank you! π
~Jaclynn~
Awesome! Hey, my little brother has that Webkinz dolphin. His name is Divey. π
Thanks! Aw, that’s a cute name! Mine is a girl and her name is Marina π
~Jaclynn~
How cute! I was thinking of getting the Spotted Dolphin Webkinz and naming her Oceana. π I have over 40 of them! (I’ve been collecting them since I was 5 years old)
Oh, that’s a cute name! π
You’ve been collecting for a long time! I’m pretty sure I have around 70 or 80, LOL π I was super obsessed with them π
~Jaclynn~
Maybe he needs her to be alive, not for love, but because of Blackheart? I am suspicious. (I know I have said this but I LOOOOOVE this series!!!)
-Emma-
Ooooh! Very good theory, Emma! π
LOL! Thank you! π
~Jaclynn~
Thank you, I try! *bows bows*
-Emma-
Oooooh, a romantic adventure!
Oooh, not sure what to think of Jake. Everyone is saying not to trust him. I hope Victoria isn’t blinded and then gets hurt.
-Morgan