Masquerade~ Part 11
See the last part here 🙂
POV of Liesel:
A week had passed since I heard Jeremiah speaking to Frederic. I had wanted to continue trying to grow a better relationship with him, but I was too worried – too afraid to work on it.
Why didn’t he tell me what they were talking about?
“Do you think he’s up to something, Nutmeg?” I asked my only friend – my horse.
I let her loose to roam around the empty field while I sat down and pondered my problems.
POV of Edmund:
After a long, hot journey, I came upon Uceda where the supposed new Princess Liesel lived. I couldn’t help praying that it wasn’t my Liesel.
Then I saw her. A beautiful young lady sitting in the open field. She resembled Liesel, but was it really her?
Oh, Liesel, is that you? The beat of my heart quickened as I looked at her. What was I supposed to say? After leaving her all those years ago… How would she react?
I watched as she took out a few hair pins and let her hair fall. There was no doubt now. No other girl had long, golden curls like Liesel.
I couldn’t bring myself to move forward. All this time of being apart, all this time of searching for her – was she ready to see me? And was I finally ready to tell her why I left?
POV of Liesel:
I stood up, ready to return to the palace, when I turned and saw him. Edmund?
I hadn’t seen him in years, not since he left me. What was he doing back? I couldn’t quite understand my feelings. I wasn’t sure if I was excited to see him, or disturbed by his presence. I watched as he rode toward me, neither of us saying a word, but I knew we were about to have a long talk…
DUN DUN DUN DUUUNNN! Don’t you just love cliffhangers? LOL! I know, I hate them, too, but they’re fun to make! XD
Next part coming soon! 🙂
*chants while holding up a sign* Next part! Next part! Next part!!!
LOLOL!! It’ll be up soon! 😀
This was some beautiful prose! I had to call it prose, that’s how pretty it was. Maryellen is gorgeous in Felicity’s riding outfit.
Are you kidding me?!? XD You’re mean! J.K. ! 🙂
<3 , IrishAG
Awww, thank you! You’re so sweet 🙂
LOL! No, you’re right – I am mean in a writer-ly way XD
What a great cliffhanger. Looking forward to the next installment.
Thank you, Marilyn! I’m glad you’re excited 🙂
Yes, yes. I just LOVE cliffhangers. XD
That was so good! AND I DEMAND MORE! XD
I knew you did! XD
LOLOL! Thanks, Clara! I’ll be posting more soon! 😀
ANTICIPATION ANTICIPATION ANTICIPATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOL! I’m glad you’re excited! 😀
Noooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!! to short! *joins Rutvi with a sign*
Alright, settle down, girls…. LOL! JK! XD
Next part will mostly likely be posted on Monday 🙂
i leave for camp on monday! *dies*
OH NO!!! *dies with you*
Please write more very very very soon!!! I can’t take the suspense!!! I love this!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️???
LOL! Don’t worry, I will! 😀
Awe, thanks! 🙂
Yay! I can’t wait!!! 😀
No problem! 🙂
This is great. The hair is gorgeous. Thank You
Awe, thanks! 🙂
I love this story! Great job!?
Thanks so much! 🙂
I KNEW THEY KNEW EACH OTHER!!!
Oh, you’re so heartless… how could you leave me hanging in such a way?? 😉
Oh, don’t worry – you’ll get plenty of answers in the next part 🙂
Yay! I love this series! I can’t wait to hear what happens next! 🙂
ginnie / http://www.fakingitmostly.com
Thanks so much, Ginnie! 🙂
when will you post the next part???!!!!
I’m so sorry it’s been so long! I’ll be posting it today! 😀