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Masquerade ~Part 16

Whoo! First off, sorry for disappearing for so long! I needed it to be shady out back to take these pictures and, well, I was getting up too late and then getting tired too early, so I kept missing the shade… XD

Okay, now on with what you’ve all been waiting for! πŸ˜€

News of Jeremiah’s death came as quite a shock to me. When I asked Edmund about it, he said he suspected it was Frederic who murdered him. Believing that Edmund didn’t have a hand in it and that in fact, he had been honest with me before, I let him out. And now here we were, looking at Jeremiah’s tombstone.

“Are you alright, Liesel?” Edmund asked with concern.

“Yes, I’m fine. We didn’t love one another in the least. Though I am sorry that this all happened.” I replied.

“Do you think Frederic will come after you now?” I asked him.

“He may, but I think I can get him first.” He said.

“You won’t kill him, will you?” I questioned.Β 

“No, not at all. I’m not like them.”

I let out a sigh of relief and looked to the distance. “I feel at peace now. I feel – free. Like I can live as I please. I can be happy now.” I said in a faint whisper.

“I can understand that. I feel much the same way.” Edmund agreed.

Edmund stepped closer to me and gently lifted my hand into his and said, “This can be a fresh start for us.”

“Now that you’re unmarried, the kingdom needs to be secure. The people will expect you to marry again before long.” He said, a gleam in his eye. I felt my heartbeat quicken as he spoke.

“Yes, I suppose so.” I said, trying to hide my smile.

“I’d be honored if you would ever consider choosing me, Liesel.” He said, holding both of my hands now.

I just smiled and hugged him, feeling safe and secure in his arms. “I more than consider you, Edmund. I choose you.


Okay guys. Finale is next. Are ya’ll excited or sad? ;D


49 Responses to Masquerade ~Part 16

  • YAY! I knew it! πŸ˜€ Now for a grand royal wedding. XD

    – Clara <3

  • Excited AND sad. Marry him, Leisel….MARRY HIM!! XD

  • Awwwww, they’re so cute together!

  • AWWW! *squeals* Liesmund is so cute!!!
    I’m so excited but sad for the finale…I can’t believe this series is over! ??
    But seriously Jaclynn, this series is just amazing! ?
    ~Grace ❀️
    P.S. Do you have any other tips/ideas for making a photostory series? The song idea is amazing but I’m fresh out of inspiration, haha! Thanks so much! ???

    • I KNOOOW!!! :O And, um, thank you… XD
      I can’t either! I’m a bit relieved though, to tell you the truth! And now I can get started on other things… πŸ˜‰ Awe, thank you so much, Grace! πŸ˜€
      P.S. Oh, no! I’m so sorry πŸ™ The only other advice I have is to look at writing prompts. Creating a photostory series is the same as writing anything else, just shorter. I know you can do it! πŸ™‚

  • I’m both excited and sad. Mostly sad though. ?????
    Liesel is so pretty. ????

  • Wow! I love this story! Great job! ? I’m excited and sad cause it’s going to end:(.

    That is so sweet!!!!!!

  • Mixed emotions!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • I’m excited for the finale!!

  • Aww, they’re back together again. πŸ™‚
    I’m excited for the finale, but kinda sad that the series is almost over. So it’s bittersweet. πŸ˜‰


  • Hmmm…I submitted a comment…maybe it didn’t get through? Anyway…

    AHHH!!! GAHHH! THEY ARE SO CUTE! This is such a sweet part, Jaclynn! I’m so excited for the finale. πŸ™‚

  • I love their hairstyles!

  • So excited for a royal wedding but still skeptical. Will Frederic leave them in peace? Also, will Edmund reveal what he knows of Frederic’s part in killing Liesel’s father? So fun!

    ginnie / http://www.fakingitmostly.com

  • Um… Wow. That was a lot. And they’re gonna get married!!!! Squeal!! *Fireworks* I love proposal scenes. πŸ™‚ And Maryellen’s outfit and earrings are perfect.
    <3 , IrishAG

    • Yep, they are! πŸ˜€ I love proposal scenes, too πŸ™‚
      Thanks! I’m glad you like her outfit! πŸ™‚

  • Great part! Are you going to Melody’s debut? Because I am pretty sure that I am going to it! I am going to the LA store! πŸ˜‰

  • I’m excited but sad, leismund is so cute! They look adorable together! When will you be posting the finale of this amazing bittersweet photo story series ending?

  • So excited for the next part, do you know when it’s coming out?

    • I’m glad you’re so excited! Life has been pretty busy lately and it’s been too hot to go outside and take pictures for the next part, but I’m hoping for very soon! πŸ™‚

  • ASDFGHJKL! OH MY GOSH I JUST READ THROUGH THE ENTIRE SERIES. I LOVE REVENGE STORIES SO MUCH ASDFGHJKL. And though I used to really hate romance and roll my eyes at it, I think it’s cute now. Probably because I added it to my novel. XD THIS. SERIES. IS. AH. MAZING. Like, seriously. After reading the last part on the Masquerade series page, I DIED. I was literally holding back excited squeals because it’s morning and I don’t want to immensely scare my sister because she’s “baby”sitting me… XD I vaguely remembered you posting a part sixteen, so even though it wasn’t on the page I hastily searched it. And then I read part sixteen and DIED ALL OVER AGAIN. XD Seriously, I love your blog so very much. You are so amazing and kind and humble and sweet and inspiring and absolutely phenomenal. XD And your photostories… they are totally my kind of photostories! I LOVE the witty conversations and epic one-liners (seriously, I wrote down every quote I thought was amazing just so I could read them again XD). And did I mention I love revenge stories? XD I’m kind of glad Jeremiah died. Okay, really glad. So Edmund and Liesel could get married. I need them to be a couple. XD I am super excited for the next part! I love all of your photostory series and the way you write them and – AHH. You and your blog are so amazing and awesome! I’m really glad to be your friend. πŸ˜€

    Of course, I am totally looking forward to the next part! (No pressure, though. AT. ALL. I totally know how that feels when people bug you and bug you and bug you some more for the next part when you’re just insanely busy. :P) I know you participated in NaNoWriMo – is there anyway I can read any of your other writings? I LOVE your writing style (it’s so much like my own! LOL!)!


    • OH MY GOSH MADI!!! THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!! πŸ˜€ It makes me so happy when people die over my stories so that just means SO much to me that you loved it so much! Thank you, thank you, thank YOU! For EVERYTHING you said! πŸ˜€
      I’m so glad to be your friend, too! You are just so encouraging and kind! πŸ™‚
      Actually, stay tuned… I’m planning for the finale to be posted very soon…. πŸ˜‰
      Aww!! Wow, I’ve never had someone ask me that! Yes, there is! I have another blog which I don’t think you go to where I post about writing and fandoms (trying to make it more of a writing blog with a fandom post here and there, that way it isn’t ALL about fandoms. XD )! I have several short stories on there from past writing challenges I participated in πŸ™‚
      Here’s the link to my blog:
      I hope you take a look around and that you enjoy the stories! πŸ˜€
      Thank you so much again, Madi! Your comments seriously make my day! πŸ™‚

      • You are SOOOO welcome!! πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
        And aw, thank you so much!! πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
        Oh my gosh, I think I’m going to explode when the finale is posted. XD And then I’ll hastily come back to life so I can read it. XD
        Ooh, thank you so much! I know I’ve been to Little Miss Fluffet in the past but never looked around much. I will totally check it out ASAP and follow!
        And you are so very welcome! I am so glad!! πŸ˜€ <3

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